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12 PR Mistakes and How to Fix Them

We’ve all made our fair share of mistakes. I wrote this to help avoid some common pitfalls and to know what to do instead. Using these tips will make your PR efforts look professional and hit the target.

No. 1 — Don’t make long pitches.

Do this instead: Keep it short and sweet.

šŸ’« Pro Tip: Journalists are busy—focus on the most essential information to capture their attention.

No. 2 — Don't use hyperbolic language in a press release.

For example: Thrilled, Excited, Passionate are hyperbolic words

Here’s a real example of a Don’t: Kit Kat isĀ thrilledĀ to announce the candy brand has added another flavor to its product line: vanilla.

And another real example of a Don’t: United Airlines isĀ thrilledĀ to share flights has begun offering an assortment of canned wine to economy passengers.

Even the big guys can’t help themselves with hyperbolic language.

Do this instead: Keep it factual. ā€œKit Kat announces a new flavor to their line up: vanilla.ā€. 


No. 3 — Don’t use marketing language in press releases.

Words like ā€œindustry-leading,ā€ ā€œpioneering,ā€ ā€œgroundbreaking,ā€ and ā€œrevolutionaryā€ can sound exaggerated and reduce credibility.

Do this instead: Back up bold claims with data.

Example: Instead of ā€œrevolutionary chip,ā€ say, ā€œwe introduced a new chip that’s 80% faster than any other on the market.ā€

No. 4 — Don’t send a press release that isn’t newsworthy.


Real example of a Don’t: ā€œFlorida-based provider announces a new websiteā€

Sorry guys. We know you’re thrilled for your new website, however it isn’t news.


Do this instead: Share non-newsworthy updates on social media.

Newsworthy:
ā€Øāœ… New product launches
ā€Øāœ… Mergers, acquisitions, expansions
ā€Øāœ… Crisis updates
āœ… Major events or awards

Not Newsworthy:

🚫 New employee hire (unless it’s a prominent person)

🚫 Moving locations

🚫 Website launch

🚫 Personal opinions

No. 5 — Don’t rely solely on AI to proofread.

Do this instead: Have a human editor review for errors.

Example: AI might not catch a typo like ā€œpubic relationsā€ instead of ā€œpublic relations.ā€ A human will likely catch these mistakes, especially in names and figures.

No. 6 — Don’t send mass emails out using ā€œcc.ā€

Do this instead: Use bcc or an email-sending service to maintain privacy.

No. 7 — Don’t avoid sharing your story for fear of rejection.

Do this instead: If your story has an impact, go ahead and share it. Just use all the best practices you’ve been learning in this series.

No. 8 — Don’t focus solely on traditional earned media coverage.

Do this instead: Include events, social media, and paid content to maximize reach.

Review the Mastering Mixed Media lesson: Earned, Owned, Shared, and Paid Media should all be used to gain attention.

No. 9 — Don’t think you cannot pitch a journalist because you don’t know them.

Do this instead: Focus on your story’s strength. Research relevant journalists, then reach out with a compelling story. Explaining why your story matters and why their audience would care. Write the perfect pitch!

šŸ—£ļø Remember: It’s the strength of your story that counts—not who you know.

No. 10 — Don’t ramble on while giving an interview.

Do this instead: Pause. Give the journalist time for follow-up questions.

šŸ’« Pro Tip: Ask the journalist ā€œDid I cover everything you needed?ā€

No. 11 — Don’t stop at just getting coverage.

Do this instead: Maximize press coverage and turn press hits into business results by:

āœ Share the coverage in newsletters, social media, and sales materials

āœ Re-share posts from the publication and engage with them

āœ Break down video clips for social media (if applicable)

āœ Add the publication’s logo to your website, media or press page.

šŸ’« Pro Tip: Have a press page set up on your website. This is where you show off your coverage. You would also have a media kit and other assets that are easy for journalists to use.

No. 12 — Don’t give an interview while on speakerphone or in a noisy setting.


Do this instead:

  • Use a quiet, distraction-free space and avoid earbuds or car speakerphones.

  • Be on time; journalists often have back-to-back schedules.

  • Speak plainly—this makes for soundbites everyone can understand.

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ā€œThe biggest room in the world, is the room for improvement.ā€

Helmut Schmidt.
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Term to Learn

Media KitĀ is a folder of downloadable assets. It can includes photos, videos, logos, info-graphics, and technical specifications. It should be publicly available in your online newsroom.

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FAQ

Q: Can I request a review and, if the review is not positive, ask that it not be published??

A: No, No, No. You asked for a review from a journalist, or other writer, and they are going to take their time and review it and give their findings. Don’t submit for a review until you product is ready.

Get PR techniques from recent news.

Newsworthy

TimothƩe Chalamet party crashes

Actor TimothƩe Chalamet made a surprise appearance at his own look-alike contest in an event that drew hundreds of onlookers.

With social media, communities can be formed quickly. Recently these communities start to crave actual human interaction and arrange meetups.

Engage with fans and evolve your content by bringing it to life. Guerrilla style execution may be needed to get fans to participate.

Fear not, if bold guerrilla-style execution and crazy IRL events aren’t for your brand, how about examining what content performed well and plotting what should be your next move.

āœļø Key PR Takeaway: If you have anything to do with a celebrity, make sure they know about your event. Props to his publicist for having him attend this.

Learn from others.

100% Cool : 0% Cringe

ā˜•ļø Starbucks trying to win customers back. That’s cool.

Starbucks has been struggling, so much so, they’ve gone through 4 CEOs in two years. Looks like Mr. Niccol is bringing in some needed changes.

  • He’s bring back the human touch with your name misspelled on the cup

  • No extra charge for non-dairy milk (my personal favorite)

  • Paired-down menu

  • Cream & sugar self serving area is coming back

āœļø Key PR Takeaway: People like simplicity. Too many choices are overwhelming. This goes for PR and marketing.

New hire announcements aren’t usually news, unless it’s a big one, like Mr. Niccol’s hire. It made stocks go up 24% the day of his announcement.
He communicates clearly the path forward to staff, investors and news.

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Until next week, keep your shades on and stay cool.

Your fellow Seeker,
Keren

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